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The Rapture by =BreakInTheSun:iconBreakInTheSun:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Spiritual




[A young woman is packing some clothes into a backpack as she watches the TV news.]
They say it must have been the Rapture.

[An empty kindergarten.]
All the children vanished.

[View from a news helicopter (complete with ticker at the bottom and logo on top) of a huge pile-up on the freeway.]
Everyone who was Saved disappeared.

[The young woman from before walking out of her house with the pack on her back. The door is swinging shut behind her.]
Who's going to know that I didn't?
©2004-2008 =BreakInTheSun
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Submitted: Jul 20, 2004
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This is another script for a quick 4-panel comic strip. I think this one would work best with photographs, a-la A Softer World. Eventually I might do the images myself too, but for now there's this. If anyone is interested in drawing/photographing the images for this, let me know!

As always, critiques welcome. I'm especially unsure about the last line, and it could very possibly be improved... I hope it gets the point across nontheless.

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~Echoeslegend:iconEchoeslegend: Jul 21, 2004, 1:49:46 PM
Well I like it! I'd llove to do the photographs. :D That's a great set-up for a small sort of comic.

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-Ravie

It appears my hypocrisy knows no bounds.
~Echoeslegend:iconEchoeslegend: Jul 21, 2004, 1:50:36 PM
This may be a repeat 'cause DA is being odd, but I'm trying again- I really like this, and would love to do the photographs. :D This is perfect for a short comic set-up.

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-Ravie

It appears my hypocrisy knows no bounds.
=BreakInTheSun:iconBreakInTheSun: Jul 22, 2004, 1:03:58 PM
Have patience with dA, it posts stuff eventually...

Thank you, I'm happy you liked it :) And of course it'd be wonderful if you'd do the photos for it:!:

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"You want to tempt the wrath of the whatever from high atop the thing?"
-Toby Ziegler, The West Wing
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